| First Exterior.. |
 adammichell |
Hi Guys
Never really had the chance to do arch vis stuff before, this is the first one for a new client.
I've probably missed quite a few things so any feedback would be great.
Cheers
Adam
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5/29/2012 3:50:41 PM (last edit: 5/29/2012 3:50:41 PM)
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| IBENEZ21 |
Looks really good!!
The only thing that catches my attention is the white stuff (flowers) on the ground. A little distracting.
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5/29/2012 4:19:15 PM (last edit: 5/29/2012 4:19:15 PM)
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| joelr |
i think that if your sky wasn't so saturated and bright i wouldn't even think its a render.
i also think your "white" house color is a bit burnt and i would darken it a bit.
other than that its a great job.
good luck,
joel
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5/29/2012 4:23:01 PM (last edit: 5/29/2012 4:23:01 PM)
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| BishBashRoss |
Looks pretty damn good to me. The tree shadow seems overbearing/oversized though. I would probably opt to have it just hitting the grass.
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5/29/2012 4:23:08 PM (last edit: 5/29/2012 4:23:34 PM)
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| nemac |
Looks good but I agree about the shadow, seems a bit much, and along with the cars, takes the focus away from the building or grounds it, as if it is just a bg feature. Maybe try an angle with no vertical distortion or fix in post. Also, some of the textures have noticeable tiling that you could break up.
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5/29/2012 4:41:47 PM (last edit: 5/29/2012 4:42:55 PM)
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| adammichell |
Cheers guys, great feedback!
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5/29/2012 4:57:50 PM (last edit: 5/29/2012 4:57:50 PM)
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| GirishDJoshi |
Very nice.
Is that displacement grass. That addition of white flowers works so well. Where did you get those.
The dirt is a little extra I think. Low-sat sky. Reduce that tree shadow. Otherwise reaaally good.
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5/30/2012 7:27:04 AM (last edit: 5/30/2012 7:27:04 AM)
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| donvella |
Looking good, I suggest you render that out at 16bit and crank the exposure, and increase gamma, that would really push this.
James Vella
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5/30/2012 8:42:07 AM (last edit: 5/30/2012 8:42:18 AM)
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| adammichell |
Rendered out at 16bit luckily already ;)
The grass and flowers I created using forest pack from iToosoft. I saw a tutorial from VisCorbel about creating decent grass using this method.
Change the dirt maps they looked awful.
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5/30/2012 2:54:24 PM (last edit: 5/30/2012 2:54:24 PM)
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| Westcoast13 |
Looking really good mate! Nice one! :)
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5/30/2012 4:19:51 PM (last edit: 5/30/2012 4:19:51 PM)
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| del3d |
Very nice.
Things I'd fix is the brick and dirt repetetiveness, overwhelming tree shadow and white flower overkill.
Cars look awesome ;)
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5/30/2012 9:07:26 PM (last edit: 5/30/2012 9:07:26 PM)
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| roccodiablo |
I hope your new client is chuffed with that - looks great!
Deffo agree with the comments above but great work nonetheless
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5/31/2012 12:53:45 AM (last edit: 5/31/2012 12:53:45 AM)
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| STRAT |
nicey nicey, but a few points from me, some already mentioned -
1) there's a lot of dirt and texture tiling going on. that needs to be fixed.
2) i'd also heighten the camera. we're too level with car roof height.
3) talking about camera, it needs the verticals straightened out.
4) the contrast between light and dark is way too harsh and too dark. the tree shadow is a good idea, but needs the curves lightning a lot. too uniformly dark.
5) i'd also up the camera exposure or add another bounce or 2 into the gi solution as it looks too contrasty and 'murky' at the mo. like it's been smothered in thick AO
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5/31/2012 3:16:37 PM (last edit: 5/31/2012 3:16:37 PM)
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